Sunday, December 4, 2011

Haiku for Time

The sun did not rise
Day not broken night not set
Grayness tells no time

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  1. I like this. It speaks to me. Or should I say, it feels like I've spoken it. It's something I've lived. I have "felt" this. How the hell did you steal into my mind?

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  3. We have a common element. The element is unrelenting pain.

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    1. And thank you, Lola. This one is technically a "good" haiku.

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